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snelsonnet (nr. 4.882):

Storm after the Calm

De song werd met bedenkingen ontvangen
En Common Linnets, wat een rare keus
Die vogels heten op zijn Hollands kneus
De woordspeling leek in de lucht te hangen

Maar nee, het duo toonde zich geen kneuzen
Sinds de finale zijn ze ware reuzen

... Ilse de Lange en Waylon eindigen met hun song ‘Calm after the Storm’ op de tweede plaats. De beste Nederlandse prestatie sinds 1975. Common linnet is een vinkensoort, die in het Nederlands kneu heet, en in het Frans linotte mélodieuse ...

Schrijver: Hendrik te Paske, 12 mei 2014

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Naam:: Ettina J. Hansen
Datum:: 13 mei 2014; Mooie vondst: De woordspeling leek in de lucht te hangen.
Evenals de titel.
In een leuk snelsonnet!

'woordspeling' valt inderdaad wat uit de toon, maar niet echt storend, het kan door de beugel!

Naam:: Hans Mooi
Datum:: 12 mei 2014; Jammer dat het accent in het woord 'woordspeling' in de vierde regel op de laatste lettergreep valt, waardoor het metrum niet juist is.

Naam:: Petra Hermans
Datum:: 12 mei 2014
Email:: worldpoet546live.nl; "What's in a name?"...van Shakespeare.

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