Snelsonnetten

snelsonnet (nr. 7.246):

Hoop

de hele wereld wordt verziekt, helaas
- het bos, de lucht, ook tijger, krokodil -
omdat het Geld, dat monster, álles wil
en macht zegt: protesteren is geraas!

maar drommels, zelfs vandaag gloort toch weer hoop
het groene droomt en strijdt - en stopt de sloop

... Ik heb het gedicht aangepast. ...

Zie ook: https://janbontje.wordpress.com/

Schrijver: Jan Bontje
25 april 2021

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Er zijn 2 reacties op deze inzending:

Naam:: Maxim
Datum:: 25 april 2021; Ik lees in Ramsey Nasr's Fundamenten
En in de New Green Deal van W. van Dieren
Dat 'groei' niet meer is dan een hoop van mieren
Waar ego's hun illusies uit gaan venten

Met dank aan Watt en zijn machien van stoom
Werd USA 'Amerikaanse Droom'
Die droom van Uncle Sam, die maakt me bang -
Een land van hoop en glorie...voor hoelang?

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Ramsey Nasr: De Fundamenten (2021)
Wouter van Dieren: New Green Deal - beyond the financial crisis (2009)

Naam:: Hans Mooi
Datum:: 25 april 2021; Ik zal nu geen kritiek spuiten op je merkwaardige verwoording van wat je wilt zeggen in het kwatrijn.
Maar kun je nu écht niet zorgen voor kloppende metra? In regel 5 deugt daar werkelijk niets van.

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