Snelsonnetten

snelsonnet (nr. 6.410):

Telraam

Vanuit het dodenrijk verzocht mij Driek
(Diens naam gebruik ik om me in te dekken)
Om eens de stoute schoenen aan te trekken
Voor mild verpakte snelsonnetkritiek:

Wilt u, collega‘s, naar de winkel gaan,
En schaf u daar zo’n handig telraam aan.

... De regels voor het snelsonnet liggen vast, zie: www.gedichten.nl/dichtwoordenboek/233_Snelsonnet.html
Door mijn allerliefste collega’s wordt in hun overigens vormvaste rijmen met het aantal regels en lettergrepen nog wel eens de hand gelicht, maar dichterlijke vrijheid is hier niet van toepassing.
Was getekend: Wim Overweg, recht in de leer en roomser dan de paus. ...

Schrijver: Wim Overweg, 27 december 2018

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Inge Boulonois, 6 jaar geleden

Och Wim,
Een telraam is voor strenge, oude heren
Hoog tijd om vrijheid meer te appreciëren!

leonardo, 6 jaar geleden

Helemaal gelijk Wim. Af en toe moeten we er als dichters soms op worden gewezen dat we op het rechte pad moeten blijven met de techniek van onze versjes...

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